Today I am glad to welcome Alison Morton to talk about how she succeeded in publishing her first novel and what success means to her. Alison's alias is of course 'The Hand of Philofaxy.'
First of all, thank you so much, Helen, for inviting me on to your blog to talk about the process behind writing INCEPTIO, the first in the series of alternate history thrillers.
Is writing fiction something you have always wanted to do or is it a recent thing?
I’d played with words much of my life – playwright (aged 7), article writer, local magazine editor, translator and dissertation writer. But I came to novel writing in reaction to a particularly dire film; the cinematography was good, but the plot dire and narration jerky.
‘I could do better that that,’ I whispered in the darkened cinema.
‘So why don’t you?’ came my other half’s reply.
Ninety days later, I’d completed the first draft of INCEPTIO.
What happened next?
I didn’t have a clue what to do with my 96,000 words. I’d been so desperate to get the story down, to see if I could do it, that I hadn’t planned anything after the words THE END. Luckily, a business friend who was writing a historic novel – a shock to me – took me along to her novel writing group and encouraged me to join the Romantic Novelists’ Association that had a scheme for fostering new writers. I realised then that I knew nothing about the book world and publishing.
Clearly, I had to educate myself, so I sat down and worked out carefully how to go about this; I didn’t want to waste my time or money. I read, asked questions, researched and joined online forums, then chose and attended conferences and courses that would benefit me most. I set up my blog on World Book Day in 2010 to keep a note of my experiences and discoveries, and networked like mad.
Of course, I made the classic mistake of sending INCEPTIO off to literary agents too soon, and received rejection after rejection. Despondent at first, I ‘gathered up my grit’ and sent the manuscript off to a renowned publishing consultant for answers. I’d made the classic mistakes: overwriting, not nailing my story as either a romance or a thriller, but most of all, muddled voice. Voice is how the book sounds to the reader; the words used must be right for the type of story and the tone consistent. Consequence – restructure, rewrite large chunks and polish, polish, polish. Shortly after this, I acquired a mentor and gathered together a group of fairly critical beta/test readers who gave me terrific feedback.
Now I started receiving some encouraging replies, including full manuscript requests, even from a US agent! I had replies like ‘If it was a straight thriller, I’d take it on’ and ‘Your writing is excellent, but it wouldn’t fit our list.’ At last I knew my writing was publishable. But I had reached a brick wall.
Apart from a recession not being the best time to bring out a book, the traditional route of finding a literary agent who then secures a deal with a publisher has become very, very hard. Although looking out for the next big thing, agents are tending to stick to sure things rather than interesting things with no track record. Many publishers, especially the big beasts, will not look at direct approaches from the public. It’s all about time, money and cost benefit analysis.
But the revolution of ebooks and Print On Demand technology had changed the publishing landscape. Individual authors could have their books printed as and when needed and upload them to the Internet themselves. Publishing services companies who took no rights, but provided modular services – sometimes packaged together – on a paying basis like any other professional service were emerging. Authors could now choose. Authors now had power and control.
I was (am!) passionate about my alternate history stories so I decided to self-publish with a bought-in publishing services package from SilverWood Books. They have done all the things a traditional publisher would do – editing, registrations, typesetting, design, book jacket, proofing, etc. Their beautiful cover for INCEPTIO recently won a cover design competition. I’ve had hours of support, starter packs of promotional materials, marketing guidance – lots of individual help and fast responses. I’ve found it a fantastic way as a new writer to enter the market.
So what’s INCEPTIO about?
New York – present day, alternate reality. Karen Brown, angry and frightened after surviving a kidnap attempt, has a harsh choice – being eliminated by government enforcer Jeffery Renschman or fleeing to the mysterious Roma Nova, her dead mother’s homeland in Europe. Founded sixteen centuries ago by Roman exiles and ruled by women, Roma Nova gives Karen safety, a ready-made family and a new career. But a shocking discovery about her new lover, the fascinating but arrogant special forces officer Conrad Tellus who rescued her in America, isolates her.
Renschman reaches into her new home and nearly kills her. Recovering, she is desperate to find out why he is hunting her so viciously. Unable to rely on anybody else, she undergoes intensive training, develops fighting skills and becomes an undercover cop. But crazy with bitterness at his past failures, Renschman sets a trap for her, knowing she has no choice but to spring it…
What are you working on now?
The next one in the series, PERFIDITAS (Betrayal). I’ve drafted and self-edited it, but I haven’t looked at it for several months as I’ve been concentrating on getting INCEPTIO published. As with any series, we meet some familiar characters as well as new ones, but as in INCEPTIO, there’s a lot of trouble and danger.
And how do I define success?
When I’m walking up a red carpet to the première of the film!
More seriously, this is a complex question. At first, it’s wonderful to get your story published, full stop. To hold the book in your hand, to click and download the ebook with your name on is heady stuff!
I think the thing is to set modest goals and then revise them, hopefully upward. It can be books sold, positive reviews, guest post invitations, press coverage, however you like to express it. I have some numbers I would like to achieve, but it’s early days. Perhaps you’ll let me come back and update you…
INCEPTIO is available from:
Amazon UK [http://www.amazon.co.uk/Inceptio-Roma-Nova-Alison-Morton/dp/1781320624]
Amazon US [http://www.amazon.com/Inceptio-Roma-Nova-Alison-Morton/dp/1781320624]
You can read more about Alison, Romans, alternate history and writing here: